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=Shinju-the-Dragon asked if Villy could get a boyfriend and after some talk we decided I sould draw him.. So! Tadaa!
Here's Tapio, Villy's new boyfriend~

Here's Villy btw

I gave him water element because, earth and water elementals often work together with harvest and flowers and that stuff!

I had fun with designing him, and it was done much faster then I expected oO

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Tapio & Fezagons (c) me
Villy (c) =Shinju-the-Dragon

Hope ya like him~

Critiques


:iconthunderskull:
He looks good c: those colors suite him well and his anatomy is mostly good <3

But there is some things... Like the ears. He's a water-dragon, right? Well, usually the animals that live and feed off the water have very small/no outer ears becasue they're a major harm while swimming. As would be the feather-thingy.

Also I've noticed you draw horribly small chests o3o If you look at a human, you'll notice the chest's about ~1/5 of the body, for a dog it's 1/3 or more, for a horse even more. So if lungs are big and for a creature that can't even fly, the lungs of a flying/diving dragon must be really big. It takes a lot of oxygen to be underwater and even more to fly, I mean an ENORMOUS lot of air D8>
But with lungs that size I don't think he could do more than walk. If even that.

Here's a picture of an otter [link] . The head-shape and how itäs attached to the body hekps it go better in the water, also how the limbs are attached to the body. Tapio's body-structure is one for a full-land animal.

His wings seem a bit small, too. Or then the thumb's really big. But if they're the size they look to be, it'll be hard for him to keep himself in the air. (the size? I'd say from the looks that one wing's about 1/3 of his body-size) or then smaller.

Here, I made you a piccu to explain everything I said c: [link] *dl to see the texts well*

Hope you find this more helpful than like... mean D:> I think it sounds a bit rude... Sorry about that :/
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:iconwindige-himmel:
As allows, LOVE the ears, they just make the character so emotional as well as the colors! He looks like he could blend in with river rocks and dry leaves, very believable. He looks like he belongs in the wild :3

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:iconenshroudedvixen:
Awesome! I love how he turned out :D

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I'll paint the walls of the palace with your blood. ~Touzokuou

Chuuuuu~ =3
:iconshiraime:
He is absolutely adorable !! :heart:

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Shiraime

Il y a des sourires qui éclipsent tous les autres. Je voudrais pouvoir toujours voir celui-là...

icon by [link] :heart:

:eager: dragon : [link] :thanks:
:icondragonfighter-sc:
wow he's so pretty Oo
those colors are smexy o3o

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:iconnairo-ryu:
Hes a beautiful fezagon. C: I love his colors.

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Icon by =Aiyume :heart:
:iconmaster-kankuro:
AWW!!! How cute he is with her girlfriend and all about that stuff.
But poor Villy indeed.

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